Hi Melanie  I received your first video assignment.  Sorry for the late response, I am just coming back from Educators conference. Here are a few tips from what I am seeing.  First when you do your final you will need to do a full face.  second when doing tough hair extraction, you want it to be more like 1-2-1-2.  I see you coming off looking more like a 2.  As if it’s going staying in a 2 position continuously.  The 1 position is angled more than the 90 degrees I see in the video.  perhaps it’s the way the video was taken but it doesn’t look like an angle.    Shannon